Night Of The Demon (1979)

I'm fifteen years and wrote this. Please be honest and tell me what you think.

Crystals drip from my face
I groan and grab the light
My legs run with great speed
Running an eternal struggle

I scream in ecstasy overzealous
I watch the smile on my skull corrupt
The only death is now my
Th children come with blades and null

The reflection shows the devil
The sky says I am a son of kings
The reflection is much more fun
Heaven says to follow the sun

restless nights with animals
Animals tell me I'm beautiful
Hate hate cannibals nights
Who is S *** is pure as gold

Holding the child's neck
They slowly snap any return
The devil is now such a wreck (Sad little devil)
Without her child who lacks

The devil has lost its wings sad
The devil has lost its horns sad
The demon sad accepted by demons
The demon sad abandoned by the crown of thorns

Twist and puncture again and again
Tell me you love me again and again
Fill the hole in me my master
My life dull and burn faster
Such a sad little devil ...

Although I am impressed by the content, I think you lose a lot with a system of forced rhymes