Rate my rap is real and serious? How you like my rap its real hood and wats goin
Yung men Trippin
The girls they be pimpin
Smokin like Bob Marley as
Speed as they race on a damn Harley
It's like a harvest pickin up corpses
Mum and kids be starvin his depression
The kids are gettin arrested and is still a lesson
A fucking ass is not changed in the hood
Always get by justt gettin grub to get mad
Knuckle Up tryin to punk spirit that come into our territory
his gang violence bear a wrong color and you're used to silence
Cops laugh at me laugh at their pain
To say that blacks and Latinos are not the same as
Racism is a ***** let you missed in a ditch
Fake people are talkin if their
When they really cleaner than Romeo CD
People sayin thugs dirtier than friends as ODB
Ghetto Love in the street a bit of true love
Not like freaks prostitutin leaf
For people begin for money in the streets
Just to have such Talib Kweli say
All drug dealers tryin to get money as g
It's just the hood
is good, but could use a little more punch lines that rhyme
Girls they pimps??
Wow very serious
not gonna lie im not really feelin it .. I do not know, maybe its somtehing with your rhyme scheme, or at times of the absence of a 6 / 10
its decent
WHOA OMG UR DOPE! SIGN SOMEONE MAN that kid
Sarcasm 101, but yeah 5.7/10
It is very good.
4 / 10
Wow, I thought my rap Mexico sucked ..... lol
Here are some tips: Do not try to force the issue, drip .... Use a system better and better rhymes punchlines
sucks
Posted on July 9, 2010.
