Conversations With My Gardener

Write a short piece in which you examine / explain / describe a simple process that takes place in your daily / weekly routine. I'm atatching a sample of such a text to give you a better idea of what it is that I'm looking. Remember that in a small piece of writing you really need to engage the reader in your writing. Enjoy!

The piece attatched:
Conversation with my Gardener

He smiled, I smiled
He talks a lot of Urdu
And a little English
I talk a lot of English .. NO and Urdu at all!
He listens carefully, trying to distinguish the meaning of what I say
I did not even try would be a futile exercise

"Okay, Madam, I came to cut the grass tomorrow"

Another smile and a hello to the head
I smiled too.
Everything has been heard. All that is needed anyway.
The rest is inconsequential.
My garden is growing as evidence.

Im having a very bad time to come up with something creative suggestions .. nt ask for a complete Anser, but some ideas

Going to school

The alarm goes off
Frantic motion is involved, but the day finally begins
Hot water is splashed around and dance the bubbles widly
The clothes the smell of a clean breeze are
An image is examined and approved

More bustle where the search for a missing bag started
The door closes and almost simultaneously with clicks
The dreaded walking into a building began slowly

A bell rings again and thought furiously filling head
Rushing rushing to get somewhere on time
Finally a headquarters and a sigh of relief
Until the mind recalls the duty that was left on a desk

"A day in the life of a student"

Who do you regularly in contact in your weekly routine? Who do you speak? Cleaner? Hairdresser? the maintenance man? BOM? attendant?
I suspect that Barber may be a good, because you have conversations with hairdressers, is not it?

Hope this helps.

just a suggestion:
Mirror Mirror How do I look today
mirror says very flashy, in fact you see I need a light bulb above me, a careful survey shows sparkle
Guys will turn heads, the girls will be jealous
old men will die one day, women and old men want to be young again
---
very bad, but just a suggestion, hope u write more!